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R.L.  
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From: "R.L." <dela...@sonic.net>
Date: Mon, 2 Nov 2009 00:24:57 -0800
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Subject: movie narrative charts
These charts show which characters are together at different times in the
movie. Star Wars, LOTR, etc. Twelve Angry Men was easy.

http://syndicated.livejournal.com/xkcd_rss/162924.html?page=2#comments


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Eric Ammadon  
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Date: Mon, 02 Nov 2009 02:15:48 -0700
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

"R.L." <dela...@sonic.net> wrote:
>These charts show which characters are together at different times in the
>movie. Star Wars, LOTR, etc. Twelve Angry Men was easy.

>http://syndicated.livejournal.com/xkcd_rss/162924.html?page=2#comments

That's pretty funky-looking stuff, but it does point out something.

I've been having a tough time with my writing, not because I can't
come up with a story, or characters, or any of that stuff, but because
the mechanics of putting it into files in the right order (at least
for me, the way I work) are pretty overwhelming.  I start writing away
and then I decide to move this then add some more and move that and
pretty soon I have a big mess.

Because I have some experience with software, I've set aside my WIP in
order to build some tools to make the process of building a novel more
"handleable".  It might seem silly to some, yet another form of cat
vacuuming, but it makes sense to me.

The graphics editor that I've been using for years has a "layer"
concept.  You can have a background layer, then some other layer like
clouds, and a foreground layer, and you can show each layer or several
at a time.  

What I'm working toward is something similar for building a novel.

You have a plot-line.  You have characters.  You have character
development.  You have emotional buildup.  And of course you have the
actual text.  I want to handle all these separately but together.  I
want to be able to *see* what I'm doing all at once, instead of having
to keep half the book in my head while I'm trying to figure out where
the paragraphs about such-and-so belong.  I want to be able to move
text around on a chapter or paragraph basis without getting mixed up
and putting things in the wrong place.

At least the cat will be well-groomed, eh? <g>

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From: "R.L." <dela...@sonic.net>
Date: Mon, 2 Nov 2009 01:32:58 -0800
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

On Mon, 02 Nov 2009 02:15:48 -0700, Eric Ammadon wrote:
> "R.L." <dela...@sonic.net> wrote:

>>These charts show which characters are together at different times in the
>>movie. Star Wars, LOTR, etc. Twelve Angry Men was easy.

>>http://syndicated.livejournal.com/xkcd_rss/162924.html?page=2#comments

> That's pretty funky-looking stuff, but it does point out something.

It looked like a cat being vacuumed while playing with yarn.

There are lots of software thingys for novel writing, that would do some of
that.

I once tried to use Visio, a flow chart program, for different scenes in an
overland fantasy quest, mostly to get them in the right order. Like, "gets
sword" has to come before "uses sword."

R.L.


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From: Eric Ammadon <n...@spam.thankee>
Date: Mon, 02 Nov 2009 05:45:46 -0700
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

For example?  

>I once tried to use Visio, a flow chart program, for different scenes in an
>overland fantasy quest, mostly to get them in the right order. Like, "gets
>sword" has to come before "uses sword."

I've used Visio (years ago now) and can't see how it would be useful
aside from taking up a lot of time.

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From: Brenda Clough <Bre...@sff.net>
Date: Mon, 02 Nov 2009 18:11:02 -0500
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

I have found that a simple whiteboard is enough, if it is large.  Many
different colors of marker.

Brenda


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Date: Tue, 03 Nov 2009 10:31:33 +0100
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

Brenda Clough wrote:
> I have found that a simple whiteboard is enough, if it is large.  Many
> different colors of marker.

For the last many years, I've wanted a whiteboard programme for my computer.

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From: Eric Ammadon <n...@spam.thankee>
Date: Tue, 03 Nov 2009 04:01:43 -0700
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

I'm sure that could work.  I used to use whiteboards for designing
software.  I only needed a couple dozen of them for each project.
Damned janitor was always cleaning up after me at night though.

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From: Eric Ammadon <n...@spam.thankee>
Date: Tue, 03 Nov 2009 04:03:42 -0700
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

Peter Knutsen <pe...@sagatafl.invalid> wrote:
>Brenda Clough wrote:
>> I have found that a simple whiteboard is enough, if it is large.  Many
>> different colors of marker.

>For the last many years, I've wanted a whiteboard programme for my computer.

Without some kind of pen-based input tablet, what use would it be, how
would it be better than for example Visio?  And with a pen-based input
tablet, you might need an eraser, or a resizer, when you found out the
whole thing just wasn't more than a small bit of it.

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From: mbotto...@lshelby.com (Michelle Bottorff)
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 06:58:41 -0500
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

Eric Ammadon <n...@spam.thankee> wrote:
> Without some kind of pen-based input tablet, what use would it be, how
> would it be better than for example Visio?  And with a pen-based input
> tablet, you might need an eraser, or a resizer, when you found out the
> whole thing just wasn't more than a small bit of it.

To erase, you flip your stylus over and rub with the opposite end.

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From: "R.L." <dela...@sonic.net>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 04:31:28 -0800
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts
On Mon, 02 Nov 2009 05:45:46 -0700, Eric Ammadon wrote:
> "R.L." <dela...@sonic.net> wrote:

/snip/

>>I once tried to use Visio, a flow chart program, for different scenes in an
>>overland fantasy quest, mostly to get them in the right order. Like, "gets
>>sword" has to come before "uses sword."

> I've used Visio (years ago now) and can't see how it would be useful
> aside from taking up a lot of time.

As I said, the flow chart was useful for seeing which events depend on
which previous events. Also iirc it was easy to drag the boxes or whatever
you call them around.

Another tool is a spreadsheet. Obviously as a timetable, but a few people
use one row per scene as a 'scene sheet'. I used Column A for time/weather,
Column B for which characters were in the scene, Column C for whether the
macguffin appeared and how it changed, etc.

This made it easy to, eg, see the macguffin's progress by sorting by Column
C (then by A). Also it's easy to select the contents of a cell to move
elsewhere.

I wanted to do actual usable text in the spreadsheet. Excel could take
plenty of text, but Enter exited the cell, and using Ctl-Enter was too much
for me. ;-/

R.L.


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Date: Tue, 03 Nov 2009 07:10:19 -0700
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

mbotto...@lshelby.com (Michelle Bottorff) wrote:
>Eric Ammadon <n...@spam.thankee> wrote:

>> Without some kind of pen-based input tablet, what use would it be, how
>> would it be better than for example Visio?  And with a pen-based input
>> tablet, you might need an eraser, or a resizer, when you found out the
>> whole thing just wasn't more than a small bit of it.

>To erase, you flip your stylus over and rub with the opposite end.

I'll just keep on vacuuming my cat until it learns how to keep the
place nice and tidy.

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Date: Tue, 03 Nov 2009 19:36:27 -0500
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

Excel is also useful.  You can make charts for all the characters, with
columns:  Favorite Weapon, Origin/species, Favorite Epithet.  This would
be particularly helpful in multivolume fantasy epics.

Brenda


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From: mbotto...@lshelby.com (Michelle Bottorff)
Date: Wed, 4 Nov 2009 09:33:09 -0500
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

Brenda Clough <Bre...@sff.net> wrote:
> Excel is also useful.  You can make charts for all the characters, with
> columns:  Favorite Weapon, Origin/species, Favorite Epithet.  This would
> be particularly helpful in multivolume fantasy epics.

I use mysql for that sort of thing.

Also to record my word counts, to build timelines, to organize my
production queue, and to keep track of associated images of various
sorts.

I like mysql, because it gets along so nicely with web applications.

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Date: Wed, 4 Nov 2009 17:16:36 -0800
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

On Wed, 4 Nov 2009 09:33:09 -0500, Michelle Bottorff wrote:
> Brenda Clough <Bre...@sff.net> wrote:

>> Excel is also useful.  You can make charts for all the characters, with
>> columns:  Favorite Weapon, Origin/species, Favorite Epithet.  This would
>> be particularly helpful in multivolume fantasy epics.

> I use mysql for that sort of thing.

> Also to record my word counts, to build timelines, to organize my
> production queue, and to keep track of associated images of various
> sorts.

> I like mysql, because it gets along so nicely with web applications.

Can you write, like, paragraphs in it? What happens when you hit Enter?

R.L.


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From: mbotto...@lshelby.com (Michelle Bottorff)
Date: Thu, 5 Nov 2009 10:02:45 -0500
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

R.L. <see-...@no-spams.coms> wrote:
> Can you write, like, paragraphs in it?

Yes, of course.
Mysql is the standard database used in web applications, and so is used
to store all the posts made in popular blogging software programs like
wordpress.

Lots and lots and lots of people have stored entire stories in mysql,
they just didn't know it, because they never bothered to inquire how
their blogging software works.  Some of them are vaguely aware that a
database is involved.  :)

>What happens when you hit Enter?

Well, using my mysql "graphic interface front end" program, Navicat
(which I paid real money for because I use mysql so extensively that
shelling out for an interface I really liked seemed worth it)...

The cursor goes down to the next line of the "text box".  (Which I
double-clicked to open because it's easier to edit large chunks of text
in a text box view mode than in a table cell view mode.)

I've got no fancy wordprocessing functions to do italics or change fonts
or anything like that though.  For that you would need to use some kind
of markup.... like, say, html.  

But it all depends on your front end.  

Mysql is free, but it's also JUST an electronic information
storage/retrieval system.  It's designed to make machines happy, and
it's not user-friendly.  If you can't code your own task specific
interface (which is what I do when building webpages, and it is that
capability that makes me and other web developers like it so much), then
you're stuck with either a command line, or whatever other interface to
the database system you can find already made.

If you're using a command line front end (shudder!), then I assume when
you hit Enter, it attempts to execute your query statement.  Which
wouldn't all be there yet, in the situation you describe, and therefore
mysql would send back an error message.  (You can still write paragraphs
using a command line front end  --although I can't imagine why you would
*want* to-- but you would have to put carriage return codes into it
rather than just hitting Enter.)

On the other hand, a great many of the web applications that use mysql
to achieve specific ends, like, say, blogging, not only allow you to
press Enter when you want a carriage return but they also allow a
graphic display of italics, bold, etc, which is still done using markup,
but it happens "under the hood".

There are a number of interfaces out there, and they all have different
capabilities.  Some of them are free.  

My interface of choice for general purpose access to my databases, most
data entry, and for "administration" (building the databases, creating
new tables, syncing the data between my home computer and my webserver,
etc.), Navicat, runs about $130.  I'm not sure how that compares with
end user spreadsheet programs, either in features or price, because I
got frustrated with the limitations of being an "end user" really early
on in the process.  I could find no "end user" information management
application that let me display, for example, timeline/event information
in the form of  calenders with nine day weeks, or 499 day years, and so
on and so forth.  :(  

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Date: Thu, 5 Nov 2009 18:18:41 -0800
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts
THanks, Michelle. But I'm afraid mysql sounds WAY over my head.

R.L.


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Date: Fri, 6 Nov 2009 08:08:36 -0500
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R.L. <dela...@sonic.net> wrote:
> THanks, Michelle. But I'm afraid mysql sounds WAY over my head.

Why should it be over your head, but not mine?

I wasn't trained for this, and I never took any classes.  I wanted to be
able to do x, so I went out and hunted up what tools there were for
doing x, and then I picked a few to try that sounded likely, downloaded
them, and learned to use them by hunting up tutorials and examples on
the web.

Either I'm some kind of genius, or any reasonably intelligent person can
learn this stuff.

Personally, I'm inclined to believe the latter.

Not that there is any particular reason why you should learn mysql if
you don't want to.  But I just don't grok why, when I try explain how I
am achieving the cool things I am achieving, I get people saying the
rough equivilent of "oh, I could never do that!".  Of course you can't
if you're scared off without even giving it a try.

...Maybe I just explain things poorly.

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Date: Fri, 6 Nov 2009 16:45:16 -0500
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts
On Fri, 6 Nov 2009 08:08:36 -0500, Michelle Bottorff
<mbotto...@lshelby.com> wrote in
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[...]

> But I just don't grok why, when I try explain how I am
> achieving the cool things I am achieving, I get people
> saying the rough equivilent of "oh, I could never do
> that!".  Of course you can't if you're scared off without
> even giving it a try.
> ...Maybe I just explain things poorly.

I doubt it.  I suspect that you're simply more adventurous
intellectually than many.

Brian


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Date: Sat, 7 Nov 2009 16:44:54 -0800
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Subject: Re: movie narrative charts

On Fri, 6 Nov 2009 08:08:36 -0500, Michelle Bottorff wrote:
> R.L. <dela...@sonic.net> wrote:

>> THanks, Michelle. But I'm afraid mysql sounds WAY over my head.

> Why should it be over your head, but not mine?

Everything that rises must diverge.

R.L.


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